My final draft looks almost the same as my rough draft I didn’t made any big changes. I just corrected some grammar mistakes that were pointed during peer review. Also, I did add some extra sentences because I was missing one paragraph. No major changes were made to that paper. My focus still remains that same and my organization. Some errors that I identify are that I tend to repeat myself throughout the essay. I also notice that sometimes I leave the ED out of some words.

I noticed some mistakes I had with the help of peer review. They highlighted the mistakes I had and gave some advice on how to correct them. Also, when I was reading my paper out loud I caught them too, but not all of them. In my opinion peer review was real helpful in my case. It allowed me to get someone else’s opinion before handing it in for grading. I think the weakest aspects of my paper are my grammar mistakes like, run-ons and fragments. The strong aspects of my essay in my opinion are that I make myself clear throughout the essay. Also, the essay doesn’t sound too boring for the reader to read.