For my final portfolio I still haven’t pick an essay yet. I
have some ideas, but I’m not sure. One essay that I want to use for my
portfolio is the ad analysis. I really enjoy writing that essay because I was
surprise with all the details that you can come up with just a single ad. The
strengths of my paper were that I did a good job describing the ad itself.
Also, in describing who was the target audience for this specific advertisement
was. However, the paper has a lot of weaknesses too. For example, I noticed
that I got out of focus because I was trying to make the paper longer. Also, I failed
in supporting my arguments with specific details from the ad. This time I’m
going to take my time to revise the whole essay and find any mistakes that I might
have. I’m going to check if my ideas are well organize in a way that is not
confusing to the reader. I hope that at the end the final paper will be much
better than the last one.
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